Comments : Pretend Another Day

  • 16 years ago

    by Jake

    Pretty sad piece. but it was very well put together :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Caitie B

    Amazing keep up the good work and remember us girls have to stick together

  • 16 years ago

    by Milo

    This is a beautiful poem, not just because i need to say it, but because it really is

  • 16 years ago

    by Unknown Substance

    Cute and heartfilled my kind of poem =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Good poem dear. i loved itt soo much. it was such a good write. you are truely an amazing writer. great work! !

  • 16 years ago

    by Lindajane x

    I really like this one.
    You show so much emotion, and i can also relate to this.
    Well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    :(
    Darn you, you almost made me cry. ;) Lol.
    Everything about this one was beautifully done. It flowed perfectly, the emotions were strong (clearly, haha), and the vocabulary was pretty good.

    "I'm so broken inside,
    Underneath all of the fake smiles,
    No one has seemed to even notice,
    That I haven't been okay in awhile."
    ^^ Love this stanza.

    Overall: 5.5
    Fantastic job, m'dear.

    -- Steph <33

    [Thanks for the comment on my poem. Sorry it took so long to return the favor.]

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    What did this person do to get written about to produce such wonderful poetry? this is excellent. these words come from the heart and you seem not only sad but lonely in the sense no one sees your sadness. this is a good poem. keep on writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Soulful Ensemble

    I know how you feel. I'm tormented by thoughts of somebody too. Still trying to make peace.

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    This is true to the nature of the big fat game of love
    it hurts. u did an amazing job puting that hurt into words. congratulatioons. and thank u for this. its a good poem. no scratch that. its an amazing poem.
    please comment on my newest poem plz. TY

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristi White

    Your words are mesmerizing. I really love that "won't you give me back my heart" that was a refreshing new way to say things... great writing :}

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Very good poem. nice read

  • 16 years ago

    by chikidiwa

    Love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxmariexxbabixx

    This is incredibly awesome poem.I love this poem.I could feel your emotions toward that guy.Love this poem. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Oh this is sad,but very nice.5/5

  • Omg i love this poem i live it every day....

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    The blood of a poets broken heart shows up well on the white page with words that show the cracks and depths of that wounded heart. Keep up the good works.

  • 16 years ago

    by IchixXxCrushing

    I loved it kayla, it was great, wonderful job

    xXxIchixXx

  • 16 years ago

    by IchixXxCrushing

    Kayla... wow, That was... theres no words for it, I love it Darling, i can totaly relate. good job hunny. Love Ya!! <3

    -*Alice*-

  • 16 years ago

    by unspokken

    Ahhh. That is soo sweet. It is so easy to tell that you really like this guy Tyler and I hope everything works out for the best for you!