by Jake
Pretty sad piece. but it was very well put together :) |
by Caitie B
Amazing keep up the good work and remember us girls have to stick together |
by Milo
This is a beautiful poem, not just because i need to say it, but because it really is |
Cute and heartfilled my kind of poem =) |
by Mommy And Me
Good poem dear. i loved itt soo much. it was such a good write. you are truely an amazing writer. great work! ! |
by Lindajane x
I really like this one. |
by Stephanie
:( |
by damont
What did this person do to get written about to produce such wonderful poetry? this is excellent. these words come from the heart and you seem not only sad but lonely in the sense no one sees your sadness. this is a good poem. keep on writing. |
I know how you feel. I'm tormented by thoughts of somebody too. Still trying to make peace. |
This is true to the nature of the big fat game of love |
by Kristi White
Your words are mesmerizing. I really love that "won't you give me back my heart" that was a refreshing new way to say things... great writing :} |
by JEFF
Very good poem. nice read |
by chikidiwa
Love it. |
This is incredibly awesome poem.I love this poem.I could feel your emotions toward that guy.Love this poem. =] |
by she
Oh this is sad,but very nice.5/5 |
Omg i love this poem i live it every day.... |
by Tom Swart
The blood of a poets broken heart shows up well on the white page with words that show the cracks and depths of that wounded heart. Keep up the good works. |
I loved it kayla, it was great, wonderful job |
Kayla... wow, That was... theres no words for it, I love it Darling, i can totaly relate. good job hunny. Love Ya!! <3 |
by unspokken
Ahhh. That is soo sweet. It is so easy to tell that you really like this guy Tyler and I hope everything works out for the best for you! |