I love this poem!!! it tells a story of sadness and pain, but also speaks of new hope. if anyone needs to be convinced hurting people is wrong, this poem/story would certainly end their doubts!!! great job!!

Omg i loved that poem, ur really good. that almost made me cry... :)

Hey this poem is awesome. its beyond good!!! great job

Wow. Thats...... Intense. I love it! I can relate so much to it, it has such a strong and meaningful message. There were a few places where the flow was a bit shaky, but overall, it was really good!

Wow...i really, really like this poem! 5/5!!

Spectacular.

Amazing!!!

And have cute me oh so deep.
should be CUT not cute

otherwise this is wow.
May I use this for a poetry booklet for school.
Please/thank you
it was a perfect read.
5

Wow. you have an amazingly beautiful message for the world. thank you for not hiding it.

This is an amaxing poem once you start to read it you just can't stop good work

Wow, this is absolutely fantastic.
Keep writing (:
Please =D

If i could rate this one million times i would rate it five out of ficve.... I usually don't realy long poems but that kept me interested and intrigued... incredible poem... It is now added to my favourites!

- xclumsyonex