Nitin
You started this one and it has turned out just beautiful. I am always honored when I get to write with you. I still stand in awe of you and your talent.

Take me behind those dark clouds
Ready now surrendering life
Comfort my heart within your wings
Forever love is meant to survive

I love this stanza. Thanks for so many memories.
Love you yaar
Cindy

Hello dear ones,

What a beauty! You two are so in tune with eachother.... It reminds me a little of the poem a made a few days ago! Haha!!

Love to you both,

5/5 Ingrid

I just love this piece by the both of you..

"Come now to me my love
Together we will fly
Leaving pain far behind
The two of us side by side"

such loving words, such heartfelt emotions.. truly a beautiful bond you both share. well done guys :)

Beautiful write my friend well done. 5/5

Omg that was soo beautiful! that was soo nicely written, well done to the both of you!! my fave bit was:

"No more wasting precious years
My heart belongs to you alone
The time is here just touch my hand
Together we'll soar to heights unknown"

i loved this part, maybe cos i can relate to it in a way..
neway well done! great poem, i loved it =)

luv dora xx

This is absolutely breath-taking! I love the partnership that's being expressed and seeing how much the two people really depend on each other but depend on Heaven more to let them be happy. It's amazing. You did a wonderful job.
thanks for the enjoyable read
~*~Amber~*~

Thats a lovely piece full of love and peace great job guys xox sam

Beautiful =)
good job both of you
keep it up
missed ur poetry