That poem has such good emotion, i really like it, so good. xxx

5/5 wonderful poem...words so full of wisdom and emotion. well done its amazing

Wow that was great keep it up
5/5
jess

This poem has great point and meaningful message and it is truly nicely written. It has great flow from the beginning to the end, you expressed your thoughts in a good way.
Well done!

Like you this poem has great meaning!..i love this one!! 5/5

This is very true
great one again
5/5 :)

Omg so true...i just went through losin a friend not too long ago and before that i lost a friend the year b4..its hard but yeah...you shouldn't waste ur time together...5/5

This is a really good poem and i do agree with u...
one min i had somethin and then next it was gone and i dont know why or how it happened

well ttyl

XOXOXOX
Britt

Even though i've been gone for a while...
u still got it!... :P i love u james!

That's such sweet advice...

"even when your heart is flying;
don't rush through life so fast;
never know how long it will last;"
^ this part is the best, sometimes people get so carried away in the moment that they ruin it all for themselves.

I found your poem inspiring, part of it is a bit pessimistic, but the outcome of the whole poem is very optimistic.

It's short but says what it needs to say and it says a lot about you and your way in living life... good job! *thumbs up*