Nice poem..... your poetry has a lot of emotive language and thats good in poetry and it shows waht you want and what you would like from your guy and you show your love you show how you feel another good poem from you keep writing xxx

Thanks so much, I actually wrote these poems when I was probably about 13 or 14 im 18 now and have logged onto here for the first time in years. Its so funny reading these peoms i used to write i really need to get back into it!