by Rob Matt
I dont understand a word in there. =D lol. The vocabulary is far above my head. But its still good |
by OHgreenman
Corinne...what an interesting topic to write about...most people do this in their daily lives without even realizing that they're doing it. I really like the way you put this piece together!! Great job!! |
by Fran
People watching, one of my favorite past times! Interesting poem with a slightly different flavor. |
by *Charisma*
I enjoy your critique of an individual simply from observing them. It made for a very unique piece. I think it's interesting how we can look at someone and they can remind us of someone or something else, kind of how you related her to a taunting bully. Nice job! |
by Tom Swart
It is obvious that your words provide the nutrients for a poets pen like the sky provides the blue for the clouds. . I enjoyed your poem and the thoughts that came to visit the page before me. Keep up the good writes I look forward to reading more of your works. Peace. |
by Sourav
I think it's different. A well described observation. I enjoy this kind of work. |
by Melissa
Very cool poem, Corinne. Your "people watching" poems are simply the best. My kind of poem, no doubt. Very real and descriptive and just perfecto. I adore it! ;o) |