Wonderfully written and great choice of words.. all in all, an amazing poem.. even amazing doesnt really discribe how beautifully this piece is written (dont mind my spelling i really suck at it!) =)
5/5
take care x

Jenni, This was such a beautifully sad piece. Honestly. You have no idea how much it touched my heart in so many different ways. Your word choice to me is always torn between simple plus elegant and deep plus vivid, it amazes me. You tend to always give so much emotion within your poems and this one did just that again. It pulled my heart strings, it really did. You wrote this for a contest huh, Well barbie. I hope you win it 'cos this is fantastic. I'm sure many people can relate to this and that's what I love most about your poems. You don't just write for you, you write for others. Even if you don't know it. Well done hun. A breath taking poem. ~Mel

A beautifully sad write. I can feel the hurt and pain and sadness within the words. So many people can relate to this. But what one must remember is that you are beautiful inside and out. As always, an incredible write.