Wow.. such a deep poem. I could feel all of the emotions flowing inside of it. It was an excellent piece and I enjoyed reading every single line. I can definitely relate. I wish guys could see that playing games with a girls heart is no laughing matter. Great job. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Very powerful from the beginning to the end, filled with excellently expressed emotions. I could feel every line while I was reading this. Truly intense piece, with flawless flow. The lines in the brackets are very effective.
Feelings run wildly through the whole poem.
The first stanza is my favorite one.

Keep up!

Wonderful poem coming straight from the heart.. I think that every girl that reads this will be thinking about that one guy that did this to her.. and how hard it was to let go.
5/5
take care x

Very interesting poem, I like it, it has very captivating atmosphere and the way you expressed emotions is excellent. I love the rhythm of this piece, it is totally remarkable. You showed your great talent in this poem and few lines are absolutely amazing.

I love this poem it desrcibes perfectly what ive been going through im in that contest as well but i had to tell you this was beautiful 5/5