by HidinVictim
This is really good, wow i wish i would have read this a year ago, it would have saved me lots of pain, but anyways very good... 5/5 |
Very moving. I can relate (as could everybody). But the question is why are we letting those people get to us? Perhaps we should stop caring and stop letting people invade and break our confidence with hatred. I liked the poem, it had a very nice flow and it was a good read. |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
I could really relate to this poem as everyone else has so far.Your word choice was perfect and the flow was as smooth as could be and the rhyming was good.There was a good dose of emotion as well.Great read and an even more amazing write.5/5 |
Excellent write, great flow and emotions behind the piece, I'm sure many could relate to this poem as i could, keep it up. |
by Bryan
I loved the opening stanza |