Very interesting and beautifully writte. I really havent heard of this sort of style before but I really liked this one. The language and vocabulary gives it a certain voice. Also, I dont usually understand poems that dont rhyme (kind of slow =}) but this one wasnt all complex and I understood it perfectly. Perfectly written 5/5

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

I don't like rhyming, I think that this poem could sound a lot better with some different more original rhymes that would create unique, powerful atmosphere. Anyway I am not a big fan of typical love poems but I suppose that you expressed honest emotions greatly and the form looks very difficult, I am truly bad with writing formed poetry, so I congrats you on this piece. I still think that if you add some metaphors in this poem you could made it to sounds more powerful. Anyway nice work.

"Knew that I'd never need anyone new,
You are my whole life, this I promise you."

These lines are beautiful. I loved it. Amazing emotion and beautiful fluency. This poem was very moving!

xx
Taegan Emily

Well done in a shadow sonnet style and cleaverly written with good emotion.

Beautiful.
you are a wonderful poet.
i hope to read more of your works.