Dream

by XxNeverlettinyougoxX   Jan 9, 2008


I am getting weaker
I feel it in my veins
Love is the only thing my life can gain
But why does love make me want to cry?
It gives me a feeling I've been trying to hide
I want to let it out but its to hard to explain
I would express my love for him, i know I'm not ashamed
I think it may be not believing that this is really true
I don't want his heart to deceive me for I don't know what it can do
He does everything perfect, everything right
I can't stop thinking about him each and every night
I cant explain it on paper
I can't explain it in words
Most people say this part should never hurt
Am i madly in love?
Or maybe to involved to break his heart
I just could never see us apart
Maybe I have to do it because its only right
But i think about the feeling weeping, weeping all night
No where is where ill go except back in my mind
Where hopefully ill remember each and every good time
Maybe thats it, I'm not ready for this...
Whats that he speaks of since our very first kiss?
"Were running away" that seems like a dream
Although maybe it'll never be what it seems
Even if your not there will you give me your promise?
You took my hand said you'd never be dishonest
I keep that in my heart through and through, I just hope one day whether or not I'm with you, you'll give me my wish so my dream will come true.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    This was quite deep. very heartfelt and so pure. you express yourself so well.

    I cant explain it on paper
    I can't explain it in words
    Most people say this part should never hurt

    i liked those lines alot. i can't really tell you why exactly but they touched me. i suppose i can relate to them very well also. i loved this poem. very creative. job well done. 5/5

    -Ashlei.

    p.s. thank you for your comment. just thought i'd return the favor. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by aLwAySlOvInX

    That was really deep. Nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    Wow..I know how you feel..this poem really got to me..It has sooo much emotion..the kind that I need to let out, but don't know how..I love it <3..great write =]

  • 16 years ago

    by shamvi

    It was filled with emotions which when i read, i can't help but feel it too..gr8 piece

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    This poem touched my heart as well, dear. It was sad in some ways, and in others.. sweet. I could feel the love and all of the strong emotions in this poem. I can totally 100% relate to it. I've felt like this many times before. You're a great writer, keep it up! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~