Wow. That had a lot of feeling in it. Nice job 5/5

This poem touched my heart as well, dear. It was sad in some ways, and in others.. sweet. I could feel the love and all of the strong emotions in this poem. I can totally 100% relate to it. I've felt like this many times before. You're a great writer, keep it up! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

It was filled with emotions which when i read, i can't help but feel it too..gr8 piece

Wow..I know how you feel..this poem really got to me..It has sooo much emotion..the kind that I need to let out, but don't know how..I love it <3..great write =]

That was really deep. Nice job.

This was quite deep. very heartfelt and so pure. you express yourself so well.

I cant explain it on paper
I can't explain it in words
Most people say this part should never hurt

i liked those lines alot. i can't really tell you why exactly but they touched me. i suppose i can relate to them very well also. i loved this poem. very creative. job well done. 5/5

-Ashlei.

p.s. thank you for your comment. just thought i'd return the favor. =]