You Don't Have My Heart

by HidinVictim   Jan 9, 2008


I hate, you

You hit me,

Hate the way
You feel

Feel.So.Cold
Against me,

Hurt
My body,

Hate your keeping
Him from me.

I
Can't escape,
It might kill me

Waiting for my love,
But someone stole my heart,
No you can't know who,

Just know

Its doesn't belong to you.

I'm working with forms please tell me what you think, and I'd love some advise.

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  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    The ending was amazing! This one is going on my faves list. You are good at writing emotion, especially sadness, into a poem. The storylines are also realistic. Awesome, 5/5 again.