WOW! A rhyming poem.
Don't come across those too often under your name.
I'm used to your poems not having that much/no rhyme so I'm contemplating whether I like that or not.
I shall give you my answer sometime later but i SHALL give you an answer.

- Eclipse.....

Effective piece. The flow is flawless and you did great job with rhymes, avoided to sound too typical. I like the format of this poem and it is written greatly with a lot of originality.
I can relate to this in a way.
You truly have a way with words :)

Keep up!