Romantic raindrops

by Kaila   Jan 9, 2008


Thunder booms and rattles my bones,
Lightning strikes illuminating the sky,
Squeezing your hand tightly, soaking wet,
Running make-up down my cheeks.

Bashful shy smiles, diverting eyes,
Awkward hand holding, biting lips,
Awaiting a long kiss, in the rain,
Longing to hold you for warmth.

Gripping arms around my middle,
Eskimo kisses, water splashing,
Glowing eyes, my heart beats fast,
Traveling hands along my back.

Nightfall is coming, as we walk home,
Raindrops still seeping out of the clouds,
Porch lights on my heart sinks low,
Bending toward my lips you say,
"Baby just kiss the rain..."

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    The scenery from this makes it like a fairytale... I was taken away by this poem without even realizing it... I'm so amazed. And if I ever need an ending, I'm coming to you. You always have the right words to finish it off so effectively that I want more! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx

    I love the title..it blends in with the poem beautifully

  • 16 years ago

    by Brigitte

    What a sweet and mysteriously romantic ending! I loved it! You put so much detail in about the surroundings and the persons feelings that the poem really came alive. Amazing job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Omg that was beautiful... not sad but it still made me cry. Like it was flawless the flow the emotion... the message. It was so stunning. Amazing job... you deserve so many more votes.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    That was cute. the flow was a little off and you used great words so that made up for that. great punctuation marks, helped me read the poetry better, and i like the last line baby just kiss the rain, that ties in everything.
    great read. 5/5 !props!

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