Wow that was very romantic and sweet! the message seems really made me felt so sweet and inpires.. all the words was totally well expressed and very outstanding. the structure, the flow was great! so just keep it up and keep on writing all what u feel! great imagery 5/5

The flow in this is very catching, having the pauses in the middle of most of the lines with the commas. Sometimes this can put off the flow, however you did a fine job of perfecting this. I love, love, loveee the descriptions in this. I can just imagine this all happening in some mushy romantic love scene in a movie. Yet within that, you made this piece your own with the detailed descriptions and vocabulary. I loved this line;
'Raindrops still seeping out of the clouds,'
Just the way you describe that really stood out to me. Also the first line in this poem really caught my attention. Although I don't quite understand the last line, but that is probably just me lol.

Excellent piece I thoroughly enjoyed. 5/5

Tammie

"Bashful shy smiles, diverting eyes,
Awkward hand holding, biting lips,
Awaiting a long kiss, in the rain,
Longing to hold you for warmth."

^^ Loved this!!!
Amazing! A very cute poem. It was really well written in a way that most girls can relate to, and with the ending being so sweet. I love it. You captured a beautiful moment and expressed it so well.
xx
Taegan Emily

What a beautiful title! Really captured my eye and I was curious to read more. I just loved the imagery here, it gave me warm fuzzy feelings and saying "aww" It was beautifully described and the emotions were stunning. Well done, has to be my fave by you *5/5*

This one is very sweet. i loved the words u used in this.. and the flow was perfect also.. i didnt see anything wrong with this poem. keep it up

A kiss in the rain...that's on every girls kiss lsit*lol*This was a really sweet poem.The vocabulary was awesome and the flow was smoothly done.In all a beautifully written piece.^_^ 5/5

<3Amber

Thunder booms and rattles my bones,
Lightning strikes illuminating the sky,
Squeezing your had tightly, soaking wet,

I loved them 3 lines at the start of the poem the description again very vivid painting beautiful imagery into my mind.. The flow of this was smoothe you perfected it nicely with that and the comas in between lines, I liked you pulled it off. Quite a sweet poem with a lot of love portrayed. Well done. ~Mel

Wow another great poem! although it's short.. it's so good! this is really romantic.. what a romantic scenery.. a kissing scene in the rain.. nice one! =]

This truly is adorable!
You painted the picture clearly, and made it all the more beautiful. The emotions were sweet and loving.
And the last line, simply one of those, one in a life time things:)

Amazing,
5/5

That was cute. the flow was a little off and you used great words so that made up for that. great punctuation marks, helped me read the poetry better, and i like the last line baby just kiss the rain, that ties in everything.
great read. 5/5 !props!

Omg that was beautiful... not sad but it still made me cry. Like it was flawless the flow the emotion... the message. It was so stunning. Amazing job... you deserve so many more votes.

What a sweet and mysteriously romantic ending! I loved it! You put so much detail in about the surroundings and the persons feelings that the poem really came alive. Amazing job! 5/5

I love the title..it blends in with the poem beautifully

The scenery from this makes it like a fairytale... I was taken away by this poem without even realizing it... I'm so amazed. And if I ever need an ending, I'm coming to you. You always have the right words to finish it off so effectively that I want more! 5/5