by Alexander Jan 10, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Clouds will soon vanish |
I usually am not into haikus, but this one. i loved it! i think it is amazing how you implied, that even though clouds are gone, sunshine will still disappear. |
by Christina
Wow very short!! but very well.....i just got down having to do one of those at school lol!!! |
by QuietDreamer
Haiku's are also suppose to paint pictures in the readers head which i think you executed well. 5/5 |