by Darien
Time isn't always a bad thing. Keeps us moving forward. Although we like to think back to the pass, we can't live there. It would be nice, but won't happen. The best we can do is try to make new memories. In doing that, you'll look back on THOSE when the even more distant future comes. |
by David Ensor
Wow, i really like this poem. reading it made me realize i need to call some of my old friends, damn u time! but seriously you have something about the way you write that i connect with, very real, very poignant. i cant wait to read the next one. |
by Kaila
Oh wow great poem it really grasped my attention your poems have that kind of affect on me great piece here |
Awe, I liked this. It had an excellent meaning and your rhyming stuck out to me. |
by Gizmo
Reverse your stubborn hands, what a great pharse. |
I eco everyone else: great poem. it really speakes to a lot of people and captures what they're feeeling extremly accuratly..... including me. |