Will You Love Me?

Love! =D
very simple.. and very straight to the point..^_^

just some disturbing typos..
"Of will you lock me in an institute," Of should be Or
"And get get away from me?" only one get right? ^_^

anyway, love!!! =D

Awesome Poem! I loved it! I loved how it showed that all you want in a relationship is trust. It also protrayed that you want someone to look past you words and give you what you truly want. Wonderful work! I loved it! keep it up! :D

Wow it really made me smile in the last stanza's very surprising thoughts... but the whole lines was absolutely great and powerful.. nice asking those sweet and lovely words... 5/5

I know you don't want short comments.
But there's not much to say on this poem.
Except that its great.

I really loved this poem.
I love all of your poems, because their easy to relate to.
and they don't take hours to read.

Keep up the good work.
<3