by Chelsey
I know you don't want short comments. |
by Sweet lig
Wow it really made me smile in the last stanza's very surprising thoughts... but the whole lines was absolutely great and powerful.. nice asking those sweet and lovely words... 5/5 |
by JustKristina
Awesome Poem! I loved it! I loved how it showed that all you want in a relationship is trust. It also protrayed that you want someone to look past you words and give you what you truly want. Wonderful work! I loved it! keep it up! :D |
by janiL
Love! =D |