Secret Admirer

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Jan 10, 2008


Everytime you pass by,
I can't help but notice your smile.
Everyday I keep wondering,
If you notice me, too.

I left you big rabbit at work,
Asking if you wanted to be my rabbit.
I sent you a message from a unknown number,
So you won't know it was me.

I left you a picture frame with your picture,
With a note that says, "I like you."
You asked me to meet you somewhere,
But I don't have the courage to comfront you.

I wish I could tell you how I feel,
But every time I try I just can't.
For now I'll just be your secret admirer,
Until you find out how much I truly care.

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  • 16 years ago

    by janiL

    Aaaah!! stalker!! hehe..
    this was great.. a familiar message was made unique by detailed circumstances..

    very nice!

    but i think it needed a more dramatic ending.. nonetheless, AMAZING! i loved all your poems.. keep it up! ^__^

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    I think that is one is pretty good. Not your best one, but the begining was very powerful! althought im trying to fiugre out the whole rabbit thing...* The ending of the piece could be 20x more powerful... this poem has a wonderful start and could be a super amazing poem with just a little more work! keep it up! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Nice poem. I think it needs a little grammar check, but it's really nice. I like how you used examples of things you did for this person in the poem, it helped when making a mental image. Nice work. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Love This one.
    I wouldn't say it is your best
    But if anyone ever said it was bad, then their crazy.

    Your poems aren't very long, But their still good.
    and it takes talent to do that.
    And you definitely have talent.

    Good Job. <3

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