Love This one.
I wouldn't say it is your best
But if anyone ever said it was bad, then their crazy.

Your poems aren't very long, But their still good.
and it takes talent to do that.
And you definitely have talent.

Good Job. <3

Nice poem. I think it needs a little grammar check, but it's really nice. I like how you used examples of things you did for this person in the poem, it helped when making a mental image. Nice work. :)

I think that is one is pretty good. Not your best one, but the begining was very powerful! althought im trying to fiugre out the whole rabbit thing...* The ending of the piece could be 20x more powerful... this poem has a wonderful start and could be a super amazing poem with just a little more work! keep it up! :D

Aaaah!! stalker!! hehe..
this was great.. a familiar message was made unique by detailed circumstances..

very nice!

but i think it needed a more dramatic ending.. nonetheless, AMAZING! i loved all your poems.. keep it up! ^__^