Comments : If only life was perfect...

  • 16 years ago

    by Internal Hatred

    Amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie

    Wow so good.

  • 16 years ago

    by VanityIllusions2

    Great poem.
    it's very well written.
    take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    So sad and powerful. Strong words and the ending was great. I loved it.

    xx
    Taegan Emily