Club poem

by Always and Never   Jan 10, 2008


Please rate my poems, ill do the same.
I'll leave this site, my head held in shame.
I like to know what people think,
I'd like to know if my poetry stinks.

I try real hard, pour out my heart and soul,
It's not fair if no one will let me know.
I'd like to know if there's things I must change,
I know what I write may come off strange.

But please feel free, and don't be scared.
This site... my poems... I love to share

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  • 16 years ago

    by keithnwv

    I'm guilty!!! i read poems but rarely do i comment or rate. i guess i feel who am i to judge. what a person has written has came from their heart. what i look for is if the words can take me to the place the poem is talking about in my mind. i want to feel like i am experiencing whatever it talks about.

    i'll try to do better!!! LOL

    keith

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Nicely done on how to ask people's opinions...

    As for me, im tryin not to rhyme on most of my poems as i find it rather boring...Whenever i read a poem that rhymes its like i have a clue already what word will comes next..unlike when it is done freestyle, vocabulary will be wide..

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