by Alex D
I'm assuming all these poems are about matt and if so, you should probably drop him. Your young and he sounds like a terrible terrible boy. It doesn't matter if you guys used to have an amazing healthy relationship. It's obviously not that way anymore. Their are roughly 3 billion men in the world probably 1.7 billion of them are married leaving 1.3 billion single men out there. There's plenty of other guys out there, you need to drop this one and find someone who will treat you right. PS All highschool boys are the same they all treat you like "princesses" because theyre trying to get in your pants and theyll continue till they dont see it's worth the chase anymore or if they get bored if you do give in so my advice to you is to just go out and date as many boys as you can without any strings attached and eventually someone who is sincere will fall into your lap and you'll be immensely happier. Anyway! Good poem, well written. |
by Hollywood
Wow i think that you should drop this guy (just an option) but you are a good writer |
This is really good! i love it, but it's so sad :( |
by Katie
I've had a relationship like this before. I can relate, and that's one of the reasons I love this one so much. |
by Dark Secrets
Omg... thats sooo sad... |
I like this poem... its sad |
This guy sounds really mean to you..and i want to tell you that you should let go of him..but i know what you mean when you say that you can't..they can do anything to you and it won't matter..once you've fallin in love..there's really no turning back..good job!...i can't relate and i love it..=] |
This is really sad but guys are crude |
by Erin
Beautiful writing, and writing about your pain is a very strong thing of you to do. You're stronger than you think, if you can write about an abusive guy you're dating and publish it, then you can have the courage to dump his ass. Poems are an amazing way of expressing your feelings, and you seem to have a talent to do so. Now that you recognize your feelings, take the action to change them so that the next poem we all read is about your happiness, not your pain. Keep writing, it will get you through anything! Ill be reading more of your poems =) |
It's very good but u should leave him if he doesn't stop hurting u cause he will never change |