Keep up the work and if you ever need some one message me. i know how you feel.

Oh my days.. that is soo good.. loving it..
good work.. keep it up
Arooj:D

I like the ending, it's kind of a twist. Great poem.

Wow this is a really sad poem. Im guessing this is about a boyfriend, this i can relate to. i didnt want to leave because i thought it was love but he never loved me. I think this is a well written poem. It flows well and has alot of emotion attached to it in the words.
xx
Taegan Emily

Hey you can always consider me as a friend and if you ever want to talk i'm here

Another great write! You have such a way of taking your feelings and putting them to words! Words that can speak to anyone's heart and they can cringe for you.. i know that i have goosebumps.. wonderful work! wonderful rhyming and structure! keep it up! :D *again, im here for you*

"i've been through so much hell" ==> i can tell that after reading the poem but you know what, you are still alive which means there is still a chance to find heaven.

very nice poem but sad one