Well, first of all, let me say sorry for your loss. I know how it feels to loose someone you really love. I can really relate to this. You did a very good job at explaining the feeling and it very well-written. Great job! 5/5

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Im so sorry to hear about you DAD. hope your okay. wellz it is hard to looswe somewun you love. but yeah i love this poem. almost made me tear. Geat job! :)