Comments : IM SO INLOVE WITH YOU

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    That is so sweet and beautifully written.

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    Aww this was a beautiful love poem. my fave verse was:

    "Cause life would seem so hard.
    Without you by my side.
    And I couldn't live a single day.
    Without your love or smile."

    this is the exact same way i feel aboout my boyfriend right now..
    touchng poem keep it up!! 5/5 xx

  • 16 years ago

    by nering

    Wow this is breath taking...your girlfriend should be smileing from ear to ear to have someone write this about you boyfriend or not because writting poetry is not in the 'love' contract b-c if it is my boyfriend aint read it then--lol! Fantastic--you keeping writing like this you could publish not two poems but a book! Sweet!!