by Ashleigh Skye Jan 10, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
(Dedicated to Jordan[my boyfriend], who seems to think this is about him) |
by Spirit
-The siren in the sky |
When I read this my heart and eyes just light up..I love greek mythology and this was just so fun and awesome to read with the similies to those wondrous mythical maidens. This is just a beautigul, BEAUTIFUL mythical style write and it deserves nothing less than a 5/5. excellent form, flow and storyline amazing and going on my favs :) |
Oh my. |
I like how you write about a siren but also write about how a person is drawn to someone they are infatuated with, your comparing/calling them to a siren |
by Phoenix
Wow that was amazing. I loved it. There is so much in that poem, it's a very strong and beautiful poem. Keep writing. |