Wow that was amazing. I loved it. There is so much in that poem, it's a very strong and beautiful poem. Keep writing.

I like how you write about a siren but also write about how a person is drawn to someone they are infatuated with, your comparing/calling them to a siren

Oh my.
This is exactlly the kind of poetry I love.
Beautiful imagery.
Excellent work.
xxx

When I read this my heart and eyes just light up..I love greek mythology and this was just so fun and awesome to read with the similies to those wondrous mythical maidens. This is just a beautigul, BEAUTIFUL mythical style write and it deserves nothing less than a 5/5. excellent form, flow and storyline amazing and going on my favs :)

-The siren in the sky

This poem feels as if it's missing something and I feel stupid because I can't think of what that something is. It's a great poem thougth and I look forward to reading it again once you find that something.