Good and bad

by briana   Jan 10, 2008


The good time is what I'm missing
the bad is all I'm seeing
my smile has been drowned by a ocean of tears
the good times lasted so few years 0
all i prayed for was them to last
but that now is all in the past
the bad times walked in when you walked out
you walking back in is what i doubt
when you almost took your life
thats when i wanted a knife
you make me cry myself to sleep
now all i have is memories of good times
when we laughed and spit our rhymes
the times when you were my sister
now saying you are is a tongue twister
these memories will last a life time
but loving you will be a crime

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  • 16 years ago

    by nina

    Wonderful one
    i love it some much
    i guess cuting it in 3 peaces may be it will be better
    cause people are afraid to read a long poem in once
    and i also get lost in the and why would be a crime ???
    thanx for sharing it

  • 16 years ago

    by Jahieda

    I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM. YOUR A GOOD WRITER.

  • 16 years ago

    by hadia

    That was a really good poem.
    just some advice though, dont think you have the worst life, i promise you, you dont. i hope you understand that life has its up and downs, and it can always get worse. So, think of the postives instead of the negatives(:

    okk, feel better! btw, it was a really good emotional poem though.

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Omg girl you know you have really such a taste in poetry but you know i love this one as well!! Like some people when they are with the person that ment everything to them it made them just smile no tears nor those fears came back to haunt them but you know when that person walks out it seems like there is no hope but when they see that person there is just doubt. Drop that knife!!! DOnt take your life for nothing!!! Life will get better, you just half to smile and walk forward and forget about the times that almost made us drown in our own tears,fear,s doubts and dreams!!!

    Live life to the fullest,its hard i know but just do it!!!

    Alot of Love<3
    Courtney

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