Omg girl you know you have really such a taste in poetry but you know i love this one as well!! Like some people when they are with the person that ment everything to them it made them just smile no tears nor those fears came back to haunt them but you know when that person walks out it seems like there is no hope but when they see that person there is just doubt. Drop that knife!!! DOnt take your life for nothing!!! Life will get better, you just half to smile and walk forward and forget about the times that almost made us drown in our own tears,fear,s doubts and dreams!!!

Live life to the fullest,its hard i know but just do it!!!

Alot of Love<3
Courtney

That was a really good poem.
just some advice though, dont think you have the worst life, i promise you, you dont. i hope you understand that life has its up and downs, and it can always get worse. So, think of the postives instead of the negatives(:

okk, feel better! btw, it was a really good emotional poem though.

I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM. YOUR A GOOD WRITER.

Wonderful one
i love it some much
i guess cuting it in 3 peaces may be it will be better
cause people are afraid to read a long poem in once
and i also get lost in the and why would be a crime ???
thanx for sharing it