Comments : Loneliness At Peace.

  • 16 years ago

    by Riley

    I really like this ;)
    A few grammatical errors, but that doesn't matter.

    She's stuck alone,
    fighting a battle as stone.

    ^ fav line. :)

  • Great work on this poem ;) very good... I really liked the part....

    Battling with haunting memories,
    and saving herself from the unknown.
    She`s pushed and pushed,
    shoved a little too hard -
    breaking down piece by piece
    in her own front yard.

    That's how I feel right now :( 5/5 for you! Keep up the great work