Torn

by Alexandra Jade Brewer   Jan 11, 2008


Living in a dark abyss
Holding on to what I can't
Needing somewhere to go
Needing a way to rant

Somewhere in a comer
Is a lost soul
A broken and damaged girl
Trying to reach as impossible goal

You break her down
Smash all her dreams
Torment her constantly
Causing all her screams

You don't listen to her words
Ignore all of her thoughts
Wait till she's left hopeless
And her self esteem rots

You are her father
And act like you care
But when you don't get what you want
Nothing is fair

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  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    It is a little choppy in the middle but you recovered amazingly. i love you choice of words they make mine look puney(sp). Anway thanks for the read
    5/5
    (~:Sam Mayo:~)

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    Hmm this is interesting good poem. what inspired it? and does this resemble you?