or sign in with e-mail
by Alexandra Jade Brewer Jan 11, 2008 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Living in a dark abyss Holding on to what I can't Needing somewhere to go Needing a way to rant Somewhere in a comer Is a lost soul A broken and damaged girl Trying to reach as impossible goal You break her down Smash all her dreams Torment her constantly Causing all her screams You don't listen to her words Ignore all of her thoughts Wait till she's left hopeless And her self esteem rots You are her father And act like you care But when you don't get what you want Nothing is fair
by Spirit
It is a little choppy in the middle but you recovered amazingly. i love you choice of words they make mine look puney(sp). Anway thanks for the read 5/5 (~:Sam Mayo:~)
by damont
Hmm this is interesting good poem. what inspired it? and does this resemble you?