Comments : Torn

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    Hmm this is interesting good poem. what inspired it? and does this resemble you?

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    It is a little choppy in the middle but you recovered amazingly. i love you choice of words they make mine look puney(sp). Anway thanks for the read
    5/5
    (~:Sam Mayo:~)