by Unknown Substance Jan 11, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
A little girl ran away |
by amelia
Wonderful poem |
Omg i was blown away You did it again this is an exellent well ritten poen keep it up!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
by Stephanie
Great. |
by Mike Martin
OMG...WOW...5/5 |
by Kayla
Omg, hun!!! Whenever I was first reading this, I was wondering why it was in the depression poems.. then I got to the 4th stanza and realized why. I have no idea what society is coming to these days, but you definitely made a great poem out of it! It was so sad but yet so true because these things happen every single day. Great job, I've never seen a piece like this one before. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 |