Comments : Everlasting Love (collab with Ingrid)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    David,

    It was so much fun making this poem together with you. You are my dearest friend as well and my forever sweetheart!

    Love,

    XXXIngrid

  • 16 years ago

    by CrazyCowLady

    Hey...
    I love it... it has a deeper meaning then its letting on... i love the part:

    In a world where distance and age
    have no real meaning we met
    and
    A magical presence and mystery,
    A secret only you and I know
    The password

    Very well done to both of u i love it

    Hannah x x

  • 16 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    Soar into the sky with me,
    Higher than any bird has flown
    Our souls forever entwined,
    United in a love this world has never known

    ^^ my favorite lines! i loved it, it was a gorgeous poem and the flow was great! the words chosen where appropriate and strong as well as emotional.

    xx
    Taegan Emily

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Co0o0o0o0o0o0ol
    I love it
    keep up the good work
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A very beautiful write. a very heartfelt read.
    :] This piece is very powerful and the emotion
    was very well portrayed. I really like this one
    and the imagery and description was great. .
    an amazing write. :] 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned collaboration. The flow was consistant and the message was full of emotion. great job!