by Shotput Girl
Very nice poem!!!!! I feel the exact same way!!!! |
by tania
Ur poem is HELLA good!!!! |
Naw. that was so cute. I love it good choice of words to show and very well written. Over all a very beautiful poem |
Now this was such a precious poem. It shows a lot of feeling and I can relate to it with my fiance. I wrote something like this a while back. It's a really cool poem. I loved it!! |
by ABake
I loved the idea although the I'll thing is kind of overused. The idea and emotions behind it were beautiful. |
by Cassie
I love the last bit |
by RB
My two favourite parts..especially the second one..i can totally relate to that feeling of wanting to always be there for your guy no matter what and wanting to hear him say i love you. simply amazing poem i love it...message me sometime lol :p |
by kimberly
Good Job Great Poem |
by Nix
I don't like repetition of -I'll be here- it isn't effective and the fact that you started every line with that words left a truly negative impression on me. |
by IfYouWantMe
Awesomest!!!! |
I love this poem i feel the same way about my boyfriend it is great when you have someone that can make you feel this way great work 5/5 |
by ReinaPuente
Heres something i can show all my friends this is a really good poem and it matches alot of what me and my friend charlie kinda have cause we were more then just something then i turned out to be one of his best friends!id like to read more of what you got! |
I enjoyed this poem. There was a load of repitition, but it was used effectively to portray how you are feeling. I just started reading and writting poetry and have problems expressing myself in the written word. It's always great to see talent and a unique write. Some people just don't like difference, but I adore it. Good job 5 |
by 0oAshleyo0
I feel the exact same way about my boyfriend! |