Here's My Heart

by JustKristina   Jan 11, 2008


Here's my heart
Please don't break it

Here's my life
So here, please, take it

It's nothing
Without someone to share

Without someone to love
Without someone to care

So here's my mind
Though you can't understand it

Here's my soul
Though you might not want to have it

Here's my life
So please, take it

Here's my heart
So please.. Please... don't break it.

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  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Aww this could almost be like a song! I love it! it flowed very good.

    5/5

    *chya we do! we know exactly what to say to reject someone! WOOT!*

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    I love this! i love reading short poems that has emotions engraved in each words... damn good poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very unique and beautiful. This piece is different from anything I've read before. You expressed your feelings in a good way and this poem is truly touching. I can relate to it in a way.
    Deep and meaningful piece.
    I like the interesting structure of the whole poem, too.
    Keep up the great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie

    Heya, just dropping a comment on this poem. it is really nice and simple but yet so inspiring and loving and showing the way you feel. i really liked it 4/5 xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie

    Heya, just dropping a comment on this poem. it is really nice and simple but yet so inspiring and loving and showing the way you feel. i really liked it 4/5 xx

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