It's ... simple, yet convincing =] I know the feeling of giving somebody everything you have.. so I can kinda relate to it =] so nice poem!

Damn!^_^ i loved it! how can it have a rating of 2.5?
i loved the fact that the writer was willing to give eveything to someone not because she had to but because she wanted to, even though no assurance was ever given..
"so please don't break it.."
it was sweet.. selfless.. simple..

great! 5/5!

Wow i can relate to this too nice poem 4/5

Pretty good poem, but I kind of hear something like this before. It's good though. The flow was a bit rocky and the structure didn't make it better. Maybe trying to more to it would be better.

.:CiNdY:.

Heya, just dropping a comment on this poem. it is really nice and simple but yet so inspiring and loving and showing the way you feel. i really liked it 4/5 xx

Heya, just dropping a comment on this poem. it is really nice and simple but yet so inspiring and loving and showing the way you feel. i really liked it 4/5 xx

Very unique and beautiful. This piece is different from anything I've read before. You expressed your feelings in a good way and this poem is truly touching. I can relate to it in a way.
Deep and meaningful piece.
I like the interesting structure of the whole poem, too.
Keep up the great work!

I love this! i love reading short poems that has emotions engraved in each words... damn good poem!

Aww this could almost be like a song! I love it! it flowed very good.

5/5

*chya we do! we know exactly what to say to reject someone! WOOT!*