Sweet Passion

by Mousie   Jan 11, 2008


Soft and inviting
Knowing no shame,
No reproach.

Soft ripples
Carved in the cliffs
Of his unreachable depths.

Harnassed by love
Of passion
Peace of mind.

Sweet sorrow
Of the morrow
Does unwind.

Slow tears
Creep to the surface
Foundation of all to be broken.

Power and strength
Masked in this one
The safety of his hug.

ok this one sounds more like what i feel whenever ross hugs me :D. it's been what's keeping me going lately, just being in his arms. i don't know if half of this makes sense, i tried to really make it sound elegant and passionate with a well-rounded vocab, let me know if it makes sense or not. thanks for looking!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Megan

    Hey girl hey aint been on in lyk 4 ever just now got my internet back. hope you and ross are still together i aint talked to you in so long i got new email now to if you ever log on to this still email me ne tym. Me and that mark guy broke up rite after our one yr i kinda made him break up wit me. now i got a new man of 6 months now his name is tyler well email me sometimes hope ur doing good! ttyl

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Pretty i liked it, keep it up

    polaroid

  • 16 years ago

    by Megan

    Hey hun lyk i have totally been emailin ya but you still got your skills glade to hear ya and ross are still doin good well wb ttyl love yas solie

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, another great poem by you, ou have done a great job dear.
    how is life, how u doing now

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Excellent write. I loved the flow and structure of this poem. Good use of words, keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

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