Omg its kinda sad but i loved it
great work :]

Sissy that is really good! you need to be honest and tell matt how you feel it won't work unless you try! i love you

That was pretty well written, it flowed well for about 98% of it and their was some good imagry. good poem

Ii luv this poem, its relle great n diff. 5/5

This is a wonderful poem
wonderfully written
i hope it is not true though
or based on something true
if it is then i think the person(s)
this poem is about needs help
even so the poem
is wonderful good job

Keenan

Why do guys think they can be so cruel. its horrible when guys miss with hearts. do they not realize how ppl crumple afterwards. do they really know how the heartbreakee feels. have they felt it? if they have why do they do it? especially to the innocent... some guys are just so messed up.

i hope you are ok. cuz it seems like you are writing about yourself.

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-kitty

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Pretty powerful poem. I like the flow to it. Great job.

Dats sad...cmon things happen for a reason...i know how u feelin but u gotta be strong coz in the end no ones gunna help urself but u...very emotional poem..goodluck and best hopes and wishes..tc..

Dang this is a really good poem i know how this feels of wanting to let go of someone but you love them so much you cant sorry

Wow i am speachless u are an a amazing poet, good work!!

Omg that's soooo sad ... good luck at dumping the guy!

What a piece

hurting

it kills every thought of love

now i must say goodbye
with no one to say it to
when all my life was based on lies
what else was there for me to do?

that's cruel

hope u get over it

Yep and again i can relate to this (obviously not the death part). Its a good poem, but to me, if you love this person it doesnt makes sense because it is filled with so much hate. A good poem tho. good flow and the wording is really good!
xx
Taegan Emily

This is very powerful, filled with excellently expressed emotions. Truly intense piece. Deeply touching write, filled with overwhelming sadness and pain from the beginning to the end. I like the way you wrote this. The flow is also excellent in the whole piece.
The only thing I personally dislike putting names in poems, but that's just my opinion.
All in all, truly great job!

OMG i luv dis poem i feel ur pain....im sorry bout ur situation....u cant keep it all bottled in tho....nuttin ever cums from dat....talk to matt about how u feel nd if nuttin happens then....its his loss...im sure ur a great person...

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You have alot of talent, great poem5/5

Sad..but amazingly written..it has soo much great emotion..i love it! <3

So sad! but so good! Im so sorry that you have to go on everyday like this... but you have a way with words. I loved this poem! what a message it portrayed. some of the rhyming and structure was off at times, but overall it is great work! keep it up! and if you ever need to talk.. pm me, im always here! :D keep on writing!

Good poem. however, sending messages requesting others to comment ur poems is against the rules. i wont complain this time, but please dont do it again.

anyway, good poem, as i said. liked the detail. keep up the good work. 5/5