I know how hard that is but hmm. be strong dont take it i dont, when that happends i fight back. i dont take that tolerence. if a guy hits me just once i dump him right away. it just angers me how that happens to women. i know why men act the way they do. its illegal for a man to hit a woman, no matter what thier excuse is. write back ill give you advice, and write back to ya!

Let me begin by saying I like the rhyme and the flow of your poem, but let me tell you right now that I am, as a rule, more interested in the content of a poem than that. So let me begin by analyzing content. This poem begins with what was, followed by what it became. Many emotions are shared along the way. The self-harm is shared and not glorified, as we say in rehab. Basically the theme of winning is brilliantly woven into a lost love poem 5/5

Another beautiful poem, it flows very well and i liked the words you used to rhyme. as i said before you're stronger than you think. I dont see how you can care for a man who doesnt return it. Dont let this relationship go out any longer, tell an adult he's abusing you, dont encourage him by hididng the bruises and scars. Let everyone see what hes done to you, he wont know what hes doing wrong until you tell him, get yourself out. Great poem still, i will check in on more later

This is truly touching poem but I think, that is just my opinion and I don't want to offend you, that it could be even more powerful with some unique, creative metaphors. Also I didn't like the fact that you used -he- too many times and that somehow throw me off, also I don't like that you used names in a poem.
Other than that nice piece, the thing I admire about this poem is that it posses so many emotions and sorrow and I know that it is hard to write a poem with deep, painful feelings.
Anyway I think that you did a good job. Interesting work.

Once again this is very good, will will give u a lot of credit, but tell him mor u just might kill urself one day for it , if ur not careful

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This is very personal. When I read this, I was reminded of what a great outlet it is to write. Poetry gives you the freedom to share your life with strangers, without the contempt or apathy you would likely recieve in any other form.

Its in my favorites. Let it go! Awesome. would totally be my suicide note.