Comments : Love is like the ocean

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    To feel you pass right through me; like the moonlight on the waves
    Resembling your feelings that felt differently when aged
    But the beating of the current left the connection full of holes

    Even though you've gone: I love you: though your love stopped long ago

    I just had to copy and paste my favorite lines. All I have to say is WOW! This was TOTALLY AMAZING! This should be in a book of poetry. It is by far one of the best love poems I have EVER read and is so going in my favorites. I might even frame it and hang it in my room (giving you the due credit) because it's breathtaking and beautiful!
    *ME*