This is so good! You speak from the heart, but with poetic flow and rhyme, showing true talent! I applaud!
*ME*

Lovely. its sad but peacfully so. in a calm when chaotic sort of way. its worded beautifully and the flow was strong and carried out through the entire poem. i love it.
i have a place like this.

--TheGothicAlbino

Well done.Well written.Great poem , everything was on point ...love this poem its awesome!!!...=)