So I clicked on this because the title caught my eye, and let me say, I didn't think it'd be anywhere near as good as it turned out to be. You have such a gift. Such talent. I enjoyed this very much.

OMG! If I have the rights I'll ask you to change your nickname to "The Queen of Dark". Baby, what's this? This is an approval that you really live the dark poems!!! You know, if I tell you something you won't believe me. Every word here in this poem became engraved in my mind (the narrow mind). I loved the idea of prisms of glass, eyes and colors...and how you connected all in a physical reaction.
Brilliant as always. Thank you again. This poem is added to my favorites.

Superbly written. I would echo on Khalid Sir's comment that you indeed are Queen of Dark. How beautifully have you sketched this piece.
One of my favorites on PnQ
Keep writing:)