God Why?

by briana   Jan 11, 2008


I look up in the sky and see something pass me by
I hear a voice i haven't heard before
I wonder if its god
ready to open his doors

I say...

god why would you take him away
and leave me here to suffer each and every day
why must i get on my knees and pray
when theres nothing you can do or say

God...

What do I need to do to survive?
must i face my fears and some how swallow my pride
Staying Alive!How and Why?

God..

I respect you, love you and don't put your name in vain
so why must i ask
do you put me through pain
Why don't you let me take it all away
you just keep making me feel insane

i was looking for your heaven your hell is what i found
They say...
In god we trust
gods speed and god bless you
but Lord what does Life really mean

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  • 16 years ago

    by rachael

    Hey, yeah u say what does life really mean.maybe its that its a whole lot of chances and opportunities to choose to pursue something, no matter what it is for dif ppl. and yeh just a thought that it might not be god's fault for dif stuff that happens, coz he only wants good for us i spose. but since ppl have a choice they can choose to do just about anything they want and god isnt stopping us from choosing i spose, so a lot of bad stuff can happen. idk if that makes any sense.maybe its just me getting carried away with my thoughts=)sorry if i confused you.

  • 16 years ago

    by nina

    GOD is always playing CHESS with each one of us. He makes Moves in our LIFE & then sits back to see how we react to the CHALLENGES ... So make the best move before CHECKMATE....
    a wonderful one keep writing
    i love your poems
    cause you can feel each one of it when you read it even if you didn't leave it ...
    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    Wow!
    truly a great poem!
    and a great poet ;)!
    you have a great use of words and a sense of ideas!
    5/5 :)!

  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Woow! This is a really good poem. I know how it is to go through somthing like that. ive been there so many times. kasia 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammi

    This is one AMAZING piece of art it is some thing we all have ask many time and never seem to get answers anyways you get 5/5 from me all the way.

    Tammi,

    Thank you for your comment on my poem.

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