Comments : Razor Lies

  • 16 years ago

    by The Tears I bleed

    I love the last stanza!!

  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Wow i love it <333

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    "Razor tears at my skin
    His memory at my heart
    It's all I can to do
    To keep from falling apart"

    that was my favourite stanza.
    great poem, i didn't see any mistakes.

    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A very sad piece. very emotional. very deep.
    ana amazing, as usual. the poem as a whole
    is wonderful and very well thought out. and
    the first and last stanza were my favorite.

    great write . 5/5.
    keep it up. :]
    XoXo-WilTED-ViViANE-XoXo.