Wow.. this poem, totally beautiful. It captured my heart whenever I read it and brought up a lot of sad emotions. I could picture the entire scene happening in my heart, it was definitely a heart breaking. I'm sure a lot of teens and other people will be able to relate to this piece, I am unable to personally. But it was still amazing nontheless, great job! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

I like how you left the end of the poem open and the reader can create their own ending. I also liked the imagery you used, especialy in the first few lines. I think you could use elipses (like you did in the last three stanzas) throughout the entire poem, and it would be a little more powerful.
Nice poem,
~Ash