Sittin here drawing circles

by Beautiful Disaster   Jan 11, 2008


Sitting here drawing circles around your name
Because if I drew a heart it would break
Circles keep going and going
But hearts break in the end
I just wish you'd see how much you mean to me
Hopefully I'll mean that much to you
All these circles fill my notebook pages
Circles filled in with your name
I guess I'm finally tame
My heart wants you near
Your voice for only me to hear
My vision is now very clear
As I'm sitting here drawing circles around our names

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  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Its an great poem. it make me understand your pain that you are going through, and besides its areally greatly written.all i have to say to critisize it change the format.

    i give it a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by checkerboard

    That is really good, it is a new way of thinking. i would give it a 5!!!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Harutan

    This poem is very good...i love how the format goes into a rhym (spellings bad) near the end, and the whole thing makes me wanna read it again, just to think more about the metaphores in it. 5/5 indeed!

  • 16 years ago

    by James Weatherbee

    Awww thats so sweet hun 500/5 fore sure *hugs*

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Interesting write, creative and different from anything I've read before. I like the metaphor of circles.
    Nicely written poem.
    Well done!